Sunday, March 07, 2010


You came crashing down
Took my breath and stung my eyes
A cleansing brine

I remember the taste
Remember the sound
As you came crashing, down and down

As I recovered
Began to dry
I felt you sticky, on my thigh

Another wave rolled in
And we crashed in two
Spread out, splashed back into you

Amazes me how we keep balance
On ever-shifting sands
By holding hands

In ever-rolling waves
Powerful you, powerful me
In the sea salt see


Blogger CreativeMind said...

this is my favorite very vivid i can picture every detail that you speak.

6:58 AM  
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Blogger Apollo's Mermaid said...

Thank you, Ms. Givens. I enjoyed your blog, as well!

10:33 PM  
Blogger Anthans said...

As I was reading it I could hear it as a song in my head. Those are well written lyrics. Did you invent them?

9:00 AM  
Blogger Apollo's Mermaid said...

Yes, Athans, this is my original.

11:27 AM  
Blogger Naveen's Heart said...

nice..good..amazing..beautiful..vivid..all these words dissolve themselves to explain but none in single neither all in collection is able 2 define it..

6:17 AM  
Blogger Naveen's Heart said...

amazing...beautiful...fascinating....divine..all these words dissolve in an attempt to describe ur lines but none succeed coz ur thoughts r far beyond 4m their range of meanings

6:19 AM  
Blogger Jhil said...

its really nice :)

8:47 AM  
Blogger Cioara Andrei said...

Foarte interesant subiectul postat de tine. M-am uitat pe blogul tau si imi place si am sa mai revin sa-l vizitez. O zi buna

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Blogger El Chico de la Cabeza de Huevo said...

( O _ O ) Nice!... I hope that all yours writing coulbe trasspasing the seas and the lands...

I come back to my world:

The Kid with the Head like Egg

2:04 AM  
Blogger Eric S. said...

My first visit here, and what do I find but a stunning, sensual poem. I could feel the waves crashing down, and hear the tumult in a distant background.

Absolutely wonderful prose.

6:20 PM  
Blogger ecelliam said...

Excellent !

3:27 AM  
Blogger KAiA. said...

i love it! :)

9:04 PM  
Blogger The Four Writters said...

This poem is like a porn without words. Very cool poetry.

P.S I want to say hello to Servant Of The Most High. I see you're still spreading your slanderish spam.

7:16 AM  
Blogger Kully said...

Clicking the "next blog" button can take through a lot of crap, but I really like this. A lot!

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Blogger Netnole said...

Excellent Sam!; As usual, you take my breath away!

10:59 PM  
Blogger debola said...

I like it. I did seem a little childish at close to then end but overall well done.

2:13 PM  
Blogger my little secret for you said...

really good text :)

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Blogger Ponco Susanto said...

Help me please .

12:19 PM  
Blogger The Independent Rage said...

"Sticky on my thigh." Who are you, Robert Plant?

10:11 PM  
Blogger Taylor said...

A beautiful passage. It's amazing how many similarities there are between poems and songwriting, or even journal entries : ). Are you a musician? I think you could make some amazing lyrics, full of imagery and meaning.

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Blogger destineelove said...

hello i think your blog is amazing,i would like to be friends with you i am interested in your visions as i get visions too

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